원문의 국어도 틀리고 검수자의 영어도 틀리면 중간에 낀 번역자는 어떻게 해야 하는 걸까?

RF-CBTC 시스템 및그 운영방법

본발명은 RF-CBTC 시스템 및그 운영방법에 관한 것으로서, 더욱 상세하게는 열차에 탑재된지상ATP/ATO장치를 직접 제어하여 기존에 RF-CBTC 시스템에구비되었던 지상ATP장치와네트워크 백본망을 삭제할 수 있도록 하는 시스템 및 그시스템의 운영방법에 관한 것이다.

본 발명의 실시예에 따른 RF-CBTC 시스템은, 선로변에 다수 설치되어차상ATP/ATO장치와 종합관제실 사이 및 /한차상ATP장치와 RF-CBTC 구간에 등록된 다른 차상ATP장치사이에 무선 데이터 통신을 중계하는무선중계기와,

선로에 소정 간격으로 설치되어그 위를 통과하는 열차의 차상ATP장치에 열차의 위치 정보를제공하는 태그와,

열차에 설치되는 차상ATP장치와 차상ATO장치를구비하는 차상ATP/ATO장치와,

상기 열차에 설치되어 차상ATP/ATO장치와 무선중계기 사이에무선 통신하도록 인터페이스하는 차상무선통신모듈 및

무선통신모듈과 안테나를 자체 구비하여 상기 무선중계기를 통해 상기 차상ATO장치와 무선통신하는 종합관제실을 포함하여 구성된다.

[작성해서 낸 것] 

RF-CBTC SYSTEM AND OPERATION METHOD THEREOF

The present invention relates to a radio frequency communication based train control (RF-CBTC) system and an operation method thereof and, more specifically, to a system enabling uninstallation of aground ATP device and a backbone network which were installed in the RF-CBTC system   by directly controlling an on-board ground ATP/ATO device in a train.  

The RF-CBTC system according to an embodiment of the present invention comprises: a plurality of radio repeaters installed trackside and connecting wireless data communications between an on-board ATP/ATO device and a general control room  and between an on-board ATP device and another ATP device registered in an RF-CBTC section;

tags installed at constant intervals on a track to provide, to the on-board ATP device of a train moving on the track, position information of the train;

the on-board ATP/ATO device including the on-board ATP device and an on-board ATO device installed in the train; 

an on-board radio communications module installed in the train to provide a wireless communications interface between the ATP/ATO device and the radio repeaters;

and the general control room equipped with a radio communications module and an antenna and performing wireless communications with the on-board ATO device through the radio repeaters.

[검수결과물] 

The present invention relates to a radio frequency communication based train control (RF-CBTC) system and an operation method thereof and, more specifically, to a system enabling uninstallation of<ins>capable of removing</ins> a ground ATP device and a backbone network which were installed in the RF-CBTC system by directly controlling an on-board ground ATP/ATO device in a train.

The RF-CBTC system according toan embodiment of the present invention comprises: a plurality of radio repeaters installed track<ins>along the railroad road</ins>side and connecting wireless data communications between anon-board ATP/ATO device and a general control room and between an on-board ATP device and another <ins>on-board </ins>ATP device registered in an RF-CBTC section;

tags installed at constant intervals on a track<ins>ilroad</ins> to provide, to the on-board ATP device of a train moving on the track<ins>ilroad</ins>, position information of the train; the on-board ATP/ATO device including the on-board ATP device and an on-board ATO device installed in the train;

an on-board radio communications module installed in the train to provide a wireless communications interface between the ATP/ATO device and the radio repeaters;

and the general control room equipped with a<ins>the</ins> radio communications module and an antenna<ins>,</ins> and performing wireless communications with the on-board ATO device through the radio repeaters.

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이 검수를 한번 살펴보자.

trackside 선로변 

http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/trackside 참고

trackside는 명사일 뿐만 아니라 부사이기도 하다. 

installed <del>track</del><ins>along the railroad road</ins>side  

installed trackside ==> installed along the railroad roadside 

(+)처음 나왔는데 왜 the 붙였는지도 모르겠음.

a <del>t</del>ra<del>ck</del><ins>ilroad</ins> track 선로

on a track --> on a railroad 

철도용어에서 선로는 궤도와 노반으로 된 시설물로 보통 트랙track이라고 함. 

(앞서 the railroad roadside 라고 했고 여기서는 별개의 a railroad라고 했음.) 

<del>a</del><ins>the</ins> radio communications module 

앞서 나온 on-board radio communications module과는 별도의 모듈임. 

어떻게 같은 게 열차 안에도 있고 관제실에도 있고 동시에 존재하겠음? 

즉, 이 무선통신모듈은 앞에 나온 차상무선통신모듈과 별개의 것임.

맥락으로도 뻔하고 이름도 같지 않은데 그냥 the 붙임. 

열차에 탑재된 지상ATP/ATO장치를 직접 제어하여 (원문)  

이건 명세서의 오류라고 보이는데,
열차에 탑재된=차상: 열차에 탑재된 지상ATP/ATO장치 --> '차상(onboard) 지상(ground) 장치'가 됨. 

내용적으로 봐도 지상설치물들을 무선통신 도입으로 차상으로 바꾸겠다는 것임. 

by directly controlling a<del>n on-board</del> ground ATP/ATO device in a train

또한 검수처럼 바꿔서 ground만 남는다면 ground device는 땅에 설치된 것이지 in a train 일 수 없음. 

installed in a train이라고 써줄 걸 그랬나...

부수적인 것으로) 흠...내용적으로는 기존에 설치되어 있던 지상장치들을 언인스톨하겠다는 얘기인데, 사실 이 특허 거절된 상태이고 실행예가 새시스템 도입 후의 모습밖에 없기 때문에 명확하지는 않으나, 글자 그대로 해석해서 새로운 장치를 열차에 싣고 무선으로 기존 장치들 제거하겠다는 것이면 언인스톨을 가능하게 한다,라는 말이 더 맞지 않음? RF-CBTC SYSTEM 자체가 제거할 수 있다가 아니라. 

<del>enabling uninstallation of</del><ins>capableof removing</ins> 

그래서, capable of removing 빼놓고 본다 하더라도 

저 검수 수정해놓은 것들은 다 틀렸음. 

between an on-board ATP device and another <ins>on-board </ins>ATP device registered in an RF-CBTC section

이 부분에 온보드 추가해둔 것 이것만 맞음. 

in 2016